Very lovely and striking work. Once again even though there is a minimal background the composition is strong. It has great flow and movement and enough detail to be an interesting piece! I really like the flow of the feathers and the contrast of the silver metallics against the organics. The outfit is cute (as you so much love fashion I'm sure you put effort into the clothing haha!) and I love the touch of blue. Your use of colour is very stylized and creative!

Now this is really a matter of personal style, but I'm slightly disapointed with her face. I understand its just your style and you did it on purpose, but I don't really like how you did her nose. I am a fan of cartoon/manga art as much as any (you know this!) but sometimes when its too simplistic it just doesn't appear to work well with the rest of the piece. The piece is so detailed, but then she doesn't even have a nose (just a shadow) and it just feels out of place given the effort you put into the rest of the piece. Also her eyes are rather far apart, which is once again a question of style rather than actual anatomy, but I feel that it detracts from the professional look of the overall piece. Just something to keep in mind for future pieces!

For a traditional art piece, this is extremely well done. Not only is it a great sketch, but the work you've done coloring this piece is superb.

I especially love the details on all of the feather and how they sort-of have a blurred effect in the bottom-corner of the page. At the very bottom of the piece though, the legs kind of taper off a bit and seem a bit disproportionate to the rest of her body.

I love her outfit and think the cap and jacket work really well. Even though her jacket it is open, and a portion of her breast are shown, there is still a good bit hidden from which is good because other wise it may have become the focal point of the piece and taken away from so many of the other great details in this piece.